The Dangerous Mouth (The spriting away of Sen and Chihilo)

I re-write my fanfic. Chihilo is older than original of her. The original story of the spiriting away of Sen and Chihilo is about Chihilo who save her dad and mum who turn into pigs by working for Yubaba who is a bad witch and Haku helps Chihilo to work the ordinary word where only spirit can stay. But, in my story there is no Yubaba, but Haku is the one who make her mum become a pig.




Chihilo is a typical Japanese girl who wants to talk to her friends and mother rather than her father. But, when she was a young she used to say that I love my dad more than anyone, while she never talks anything to her dad now. When she needs permission from her dad, she asks her mum to ask a dad for her.

“Mum !! Please ask a dad if I can do part- time job”

“What are you doing, Chihilo? Dad can listen what you just said. Why do I have to tell him again?”

“Because.. I don’t want to talk to him!! Whenever I tell him something he always gives me a long lecture.

“Honey..I know you already listened. Can Chihilo do part-time job?”

“No way. She is too young to do work, all she has to do is to just study.”

“I knew it !! I knew it !! I knew what he was going to say !! Exactly the same as what I expected. I
will never talk to him again. I wish he was my daughter and I was his dad so that I can tell him what to do. (Chihilo said really angrily)

After few days, Chihilo’s family goes to countries side where Chihilo’s grandmother lives. She doesn’t want to go with her dad, but she has to go for grand-mum’s birthday. On the way to her place, dad lost the way to her house. But dad doesn’t say anything about this and keep driving. While he keeps driving, they find the dark and long tunnel. They feel like someone calls them from the tunnel to come over there. Mum and dad take off the car and start walking to the tunnel. Although Chihilo doesn’t want to get into the tunnel she follows her parents, because she doesn’t want to be alone. They can see the beautiful river, filed, and mountain at the opposite side of the tunnel.

“What a beautiful place … oh ! There are many restaurants over there and it’s really good smell. How about having lunch before leaving here?” Mum said delightfully.

“Ok I was gonna say I am hungry. What do you think Chihilo?”

“Mum ! What did he say? I can’t hear him.”

“Chihilo. If you say like that again I will give you a hard time. Let’s just have lunch here. I am starving.” Mum told her with angry face.

They are in front of the restaurants, but nobody was there. But they can find a lot of food that already cooked at the restaurant. Mum and dad starts eating, but Chihilo doesn’t want to have food at the restaurant.

“Come on Chihilo it’s really delicious. It’s much better than your mum’s food” Dad said with smile face.

“Mum we don’t even pay it. How can we eat ??”

“It’s ok. Dad has a credit card. Don’t worry.”

Chihilo starts eating as well and she also thinks taste of the food at that restaurant is the best she’s ever had. Three of them can’t stop eating and they don’t even look at each other. They’ve eating for two hours and they fell asleep. After few hours, when they wake up they are shocked, because mum is disappeared and there is a pig instead. One more thing dad and Chihilo are shocked about is they look at each other, but it was like they look at the mirror.

“Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why I am so fat?? Why am I standing in front of me?????????”

“Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What the hell is going on? Why am I standing in front of me??????”

“Ah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They both screamed like crazy

“Chihilo calm down. There’s something wrong. We need to figure out first where your mum is.”

“Do Not say that pig is my mum and give my body back“ She was crying like a little baby.

There’s someone behind them with angry face and he tries to say something to them.


“Hey crying baby. That pig is your mum and you can’t get her back unless you work here”

“Why do I have to work here? Working is dad’s job. Not mine !!”

“From now it’s your job, because you are his dad now. Look at each other who is in who’s body. It’s what you wished for isn’t it?

Chihilo thinks what she wished before. It was she wants to be his dad and he becomes her dad. That hopes come true.

“………………….” Chihilo doesn’t say anything.

“I guess you don’t want to save your mum’s life”

“No no…… I will work to save mum’s life”

“Ok good. There are some rules here. First, you should give your dad, technically your daughter, allowance once a week whenever she wants to get. Second, you must not give her a long lecture.
Third, don’t speak to her because daughters usually don’t like to talk to their father. Got it?
It you keep these three rules and work well for a month your mum will be back and you will get your body as well. You start working from 8 at night to 8 in the morning. Good luck! “

“Oh! I forgot to tell my name to you guys. I am a master Haku. Anyway, good luck again”

“Oh my god! I can’t believe what’s going on. Dad!! Please tell me what I have to do”
“You already know what you have to do. You are my dad now so save our family. It’s 8 o’clock you should go for work”

-Working place-
It’s a public bath house for every spirit and she has to clean bath house and cook dinner and breakfast for other staffs.

“From now on your name is Taka here, forget about Chihilo that name is your dad’s name here. ok?” You are not young anymore. You shouldn’t be like a crying baby here. Otherwise, you can’t save your family.” Haku said seriously.

“Ok. What should I do now?”
“You should clean every bath house before customers coming. You don’t have much time. Hurry up!”
“Yes master Haku.”

She is cleaning a lot of bath house. It’s really hard work and it makes her regret what she wished for.

“I think I have such a DANGEROUS MOUTH. I can’t believe this is happening. I feel sorry for a dad. I can see that he always works hard for us more than I do now.” She is thinking about her dad for a moment.

“Hey! Taka ! Why are you standing and doing nothing? I told you there’s not much time.” Keep working !!!” Haku warns her with scary face.

“ah…It’s really hard working. I want to have some rest and have some food. I am starving.” She said to herself while she is mopping the floor.”

She finished cleaning and she had to cook dinner for other staffs. It was such a hard working as well. She misses her mum and dad so much.

“Taka. Well done. You did well for a first day. Here you are. It’s $ 120. It’s all yours, but you should give Chihilo, I mean your dad, half of this, which is $60. “

“Ok I will………But don’t you think giving him half of what I worked for 12 hours is too much?”
“No I don’t think so. That’s what your dad always does for you. He always works so hard for you. You should’ve known about that. You’ve been such a bad girl. You need to change if you become real you again,”

‘ oh… I think I was a bad daughter for him…….I feel really sorry ..what should I do now…’
If I become real me again I will do my best for my dad.

She fell asleep while she was thinking about her dad and crying……….

(There’s noisy sound on the road because of traffic jam)
She is woken up by mum and dad’s voice.



“Chihilo, we almost get at grandmother’s house. I think you should wake up. Do you want to show your sleepy face to her?

“Oh? You are not a pig…. I am not a fat dad anymore.” Chihilo said as she touched her face and body.

“What you talking about? Did you have a dream or something?

“Nothing…”

It was Chihilo’s dream that give her a lesson. Now she decides that she will be a good daughter.

Week 11

The New Begining for Belle and Vincent(by deli)

Hi everyone, i have completed the second chapter for my fanfic.hp its enjoyable and pls comment if anything...thanks gals..=)

We all know what had happened in the movie "Beauty and the Beast" and of course like every fairy tale it was a happy ending. The Beast had a turned in to a handsome prince since the curse had been broken because of the love he had for his lover Belle(beauty).We also remembered that evil man called Gaston who was totally in love with belle and he also tried to kill the beast but somehow he failed and he died after falling off from the top of the castle.But how do we know whether he is actually dead??That will remain a mystery.As for now well its been already 2 years and Belle and Prince Vincent(the beast real name) has already married and they just gave birth to a son name Eric.Its a new chapter in their lives but will there be any complications in this lovely family?Will that curse from the beast effect their son?What would happend?Only time will tell....

Chapter 1

Once a upon a time, It was beautiful day that morning, the birds were chirping and the air was so clear and crisp. Belle was walking in the garden with her little son Eric. She wrapped the little boy in her arms while looking at him in the eyes. Deep down inside she was wondering what would her son turned out to be in the next 10 to 20 years..He just looked exactly like his father. Big blue eyes that looked like the ocean , and golden hair that was just like the sun. She knew that her son would turn out to be a handsome prince one day. But then one thought came in to her mind..the curse!..what if?…soon after that the thought disappeared as she heard Vincent’s voice and she turned around. He looked incredibly handsome that day with his white shirt tucked in with a black leather coat that fitted on his body well and his hair neatly tied in to a ponytail.‘Belle… Good morning!,’ He said. He came to Belle closely and gave her quick hug and immediately look at his child and gave him a kiss on his forehead.The baby smiled and Belle responded, ‘Well, Eric is certainly happy to see you,’ she smiled at him.‘Oh well, he does look happy today and the sun is shinning so brightly this morning.what a beautiful day,”. He smiled to himself.Then belle asked him whether he wanted to take a walk with her and he was more than happy to join her. As they walked, Belle still seemed a bit trouble, but she had no idea of what was troubling her. She was hoping that nothing bad would happen especially to her family..

Chapter 2

20 years later

Bang!... bang!.. bang!.

The gunshot was extremely loud until some people in this neighbour hood called Greyville, came out to watch what was going on. This is one of the busiest towns. Many people were walking down the streets. The smell of delicious bakery filled the air and people chattering away as they walked along the streets of this exciting town. However not nearby this town there was a small cottage where only two people lived.

One of them was the talked of the town and the other was not quite famous as they found him rather annoying.Then the gunshot is heard again near the woods.Bang! Bang!“That’s it! I finally got it. Tasty meat for both of us to eat. Am I great or what!”. Laughed the famous one.

The other one replied, “Oh that is so cool. I can’t wait to eat it too. You’re the best!The famous man smirked and said “ Oh well I was the best until the…”(Bang!!).

There was another shot again! This tall famous man looked at his friend immediately and gave him a knock on his head. He said, “Get out of the way you idiot. Don’t touch my gun!.” His other friend stammered, “b..but but..i was only trying to…’’.

The famous guy interrupted, “Oh shut up!!, this gun is only meant for me to keep and no one else”. He continued, “after all I have a big plan to kill someone…someone that I should have killed long time ago…someone who took the love of my life away!…and that person who could only kill is me….”.“Of course Gaston, You can do it. Your still the Man!”, ‘said his friend Lefou”.

Gaston smiled to himself. In his mind he was wondering whether he could killed that hideous beast again but first he needed time to heal as he has injured his leg after nearly getting killed. Well he said to himself, ‘I was suppose to get killed but unfortunately I didn’t.”.

Gaston felt into a river but he managed to pull himself out the water by the help of Lefou of course. Although he was badly bruised, it took him years to recover until today. He felt much more alive and he was able to walk more compared to the first few years. Still Gaston needed to recover completely in order to complete his mission.

A mission to kill THE BEAST!!

Week 10

Weeks 8-9

Dragon warrior

Hi, Paul
Film Kungfu Panda tells the story of believe. Po is a panda who worked in the family noodle restaurant; although he was over weight and clumsiness he had a dream that was to become a great master in the discipline. In order to defeat the previous student evil snow leopard warrior Tailung, and to protect the valley, tortoise Master Oogway held a ceremony to choose a dragon warrior who should be a supreme master of kung fu that could defeat Tai Lung. Unexpectedly, not the favorite five students of Shifu( Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, Crane), Master Oogway insisted to point Po as the dragon warrior ignoring Shifu’s against. Before past away, Master Oogway persuaded Shifu to believe that Po was the best choice for dragon warrior. Meanwhile, Po began to accept arduous training and finally became a dragon warrior defeated Tailung. In my fan fiction about Kungfu Panda, Tailung is the kindest brother of Po, the best students of Master Oogway and Shifu and the dragon warrior, who always looks after others and dies in a fight with the evil Black dragon. Po is the naughtiest student and always lazy on practicing. Tailung’s death makes him become studious and responsible and at last he becomes a new dragon warrior.

Hi, all
This is the whole story of my fan fiction Dragon warrior, hope you can enjoy it! ^-^
Waiting for your conments--


“Po! Can you concentrate a little while?!” Shifu shouted.

“You need to think what I’ve taught you before practice! No dinner today! Go to the cliff till I allow you come down!” Shifu said angrily and walked away.

“Oh, poor me!” Po mumbled and climbed up to the cliff reluctantly. It was dark and cold, Po felt hungry, and he began to looking for some wield fruits to feed him.

“Nothing fun here! Aha, berries! En, yummy! Let me find some funny things! Maybe… maybe I can climb that tree!” Po talked to himself happily and began to climb the tree. He threw Shifu’s scolding far away and played enjoyably

It’s getting darker and darker.

“Po! Po! Where are you?” A worried voice came to Po’s ear, it’s Tai lung, Po’s brother, Shifu’s oldest student of seven.

“Brother! I’m on the top of the fern tree! Come to play with me!”

“Po! When can you grow up? Come down now!” Tai lung was powerless when facing his beloved little brother.

“O K ！I’m coming!”

“Tai lung, what do you bring for me?” Po knew that his brother must bring some food for him just like every time he was punished by Shifu.

“Ah, noodles and bun! Oh, my favorite! I love you brother!” Po swallowed his slaver.

“Po, eat slowly! Don’t hurt yourself!” Tai lung said gently. He loved this brother so much; they’ve been living together since they were adapted by Shifu.

Tai Lung was the oldest also the best students of Shifu, so he was pointed as dragon warrior by tortoise Master Oogway. He was abandoned when he was a cub, Shifu raised him up and taught him KungFu. Tai Lung was grateful to Shifu and Master Oogway, he respected them and treated them as his parents. As for his five little brothers and sisters, Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, and Crane, he always took care of them, especially the naughtiest one Po. As the dragon warrior, Tai Lung also was responsible for protecting the whole village safe.






It was a sunny day, in the morning it just as usual as any sunny day, birds were singing on the trees, villagers were working hard in the field, children were playing happily.

Same as every day’s routine, Tai Lung and other six were patrolling around the village carefully. He felt there was something unusual. He lied down and tried to listen to the sound from the ground. He heard a huge hurricane-liked sound was approaching.

He suddenly realized that the biggest danger is coming. Master Oogway and Shifu told him there was a Black dragon lived in the West Haven who attacked the village many years ago and was defeated by Master Oogway and Shifu. Since then, he practice martial arts crazily and try to revenge one day.

Tai Lung immediately called others by a whistle and told them the severe situation. He allotted Tigress to report to the Master Oogway and Shifu, sent Viper and Monkey to tell the villagers to hide in the forest, the rest, Mantis, Crane, Po and himself secured the only way of access the village.

After a while, the huge hurricane-liked sound became more and more clear. A split second, the evil Black dragon appeared the other side of the access accompanied with a thunder-liked roar and thick mass of dark cloud.

“Ha Ha Ha…..Who are you? Get away! Tell that old tortoise, go away form the palace right now! You stupid fool! I’m the master indeed! That should be my palace! I’ll flatten the whole village，Ha Ha Ha Ha……”





“You are such a ruffian! You are dreaming!” TaiLung denounced angrily.

“Ha Ha Ha……”

The Black dragon’s tail swept to TaiLung and Po with a very strong wind.
TaiLung and Po toppled over onto the ground.

“Ha Ha Ha Ha… you are not my opponents, go away!” Black dragon shouted and laughed scornfully.

“Circle!” TaiLung cried and stood up, with Po, Mantis and Crane, four of them at once made a circle rounded the Black dragon. They used strategic movement to resist Black dragon’s attack.

The Black dragon was too strong to defeat, he picked Crane first, tossed him out of the circle and punched Mantis hardly, and blood flowed freely down Mantis’s cheeks.

“Crane!... Mantis!” Po screamed sadly.

“Po! Back to back!” TaiLung cried.

Po immediately stood back to back with TaiLung and prepared for Black dragon’s next attack.

“I told you go away, ha ha ha….. You stupid guys!”

“Po, be careful!

“I know, brother!”

Pa pa pa… Fists like heavy rain fall down to Po, Po fought back, used his left leg swept to Black dragon; TaiLung jumped up and kicked Black dragon’s head. Black dragon was really angry; he picked Po up by the collar and threw him to the down hill. “Po!” TaiLung cried and used his whole strength punched Black dragon, Black dragon slapped and punched back, TaiLung was hurt severely. He lied down and became unconscious.

Black dragon rushed towards to the main palace where Master Oogway and Shifu lived.

“Ha ha ha ha, you two old fellows, long time no see. Today I’ll send you to the hell!” Black dragon’s voice was full of hatred.

Master Oogway and Shifu sat calmly.

“Black dragon, you didn’t change at all! Just come, we are waiting!” Master Oogway responded grimly.

Ya-Yi… Black dragon dashed to Master Oogway and Shifu. Master Oogway fought back used his stick, and Shifu used his magic tail as a weapon.

Black dragon has progressed a lot and Master Oogway and Shifu were old, gradually they went exhausted and were wounded.

In the most dangerous moment, TaiLung led Po and others came in.

“Master! Shifu!” They cried out anxiously when they saw Master Oogway and Shifu lied down on the ground painfully.

“We are fine. Defeat him together, protect the palace and villagers!” Master Oogway said weakly.

Seven students of Shifu stood in a circle that round Black dragon in the centre. Though Black dragon was very fierce and hard to defeat, nobody was frightened. TaiLung and Po attacked Black dragon’s head and upper part of body, Tigress, Monkey and Mantis hit his tail; and Viper, Crane supported others.

It was the hardest fight the seven ever met. They fought to Black dragon from the palace to the field, from the field to the cliff. All of them were wounded severely, but Black dragon was getting stronger.

TaiLung was really worried about their situation, he had an idea soon. He gave Po a glance, and he knew Po understood what he meant. Yes, Po understood. They grew up together; they knew each other’s thought very well. Po realized this time TaiLung would sacrifice his life to defeat Black dragon.




No! Po thought and decided to do what TaiLung wanted to do. He induced Black dragon near to the cliff and punched him, Black dragon picked Po up and tossed him towards to a huge rock. At the last second, TaiLung used all his energies held Po and two of them were falling down. Black dragon kicked them and carried a big stone wanted to smash them. At this crucial moment, TaiLung jumped, dashed to Black dragon and threw him to the cliff.

“Ah……” Black dragon screamed and soon disappeared into the deep valley.

“TaiLung brother, TaiLung brother!” Po cried sadly. TaiLung was mortally wounded and fell into unconscious.

After a while, TaiLung opened his eyes hardly.

“Don’t cry, Po, you have to be strong…. Protect others…. They need you…. Promise me, don’t fall miserable….. to become a dragon warrior, protect all…..” TaiLung used his last strength and died.

“TaiLung!--”

Po cried out, there was nothing could release his sorrow.

Since then, Po grew up at once. He became crazily studious, practiced martial arts every day from morning to mid-night, helped the Master Oogway and Shifu protecting the whole village, and looked after younger sisters and brothers.

Soon after, Po was pointed by Master Oogway and Shifu as the new dragon warrior and responsible for the safety of all.

Week 6-7