Weeks 8-9

Dragon warrior

Hi, Paul
Film Kungfu Panda tells the story of believe. Po is a panda who worked in the family noodle restaurant; although he was over weight and clumsiness he had a dream that was to become a great master in the discipline. In order to defeat the previous student evil snow leopard warrior Tailung, and to protect the valley, tortoise Master Oogway held a ceremony to choose a dragon warrior who should be a supreme master of kung fu that could defeat Tai Lung. Unexpectedly, not the favorite five students of Shifu( Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, Crane), Master Oogway insisted to point Po as the dragon warrior ignoring Shifu’s against. Before past away, Master Oogway persuaded Shifu to believe that Po was the best choice for dragon warrior. Meanwhile, Po began to accept arduous training and finally became a dragon warrior defeated Tailung. In my fan fiction about Kungfu Panda, Tailung is the kindest brother of Po, the best students of Master Oogway and Shifu and the dragon warrior, who always looks after others and dies in a fight with the evil Black dragon. Po is the naughtiest student and always lazy on practicing. Tailung’s death makes him become studious and responsible and at last he becomes a new dragon warrior.

Hi, all
This is the whole story of my fan fiction Dragon warrior, hope you can enjoy it! ^-^
Waiting for your conments--


“Po! Can you concentrate a little while?!” Shifu shouted.

“You need to think what I’ve taught you before practice! No dinner today! Go to the cliff till I allow you come down!” Shifu said angrily and walked away.

“Oh, poor me!” Po mumbled and climbed up to the cliff reluctantly. It was dark and cold, Po felt hungry, and he began to looking for some wield fruits to feed him.

“Nothing fun here! Aha, berries! En, yummy! Let me find some funny things! Maybe… maybe I can climb that tree!” Po talked to himself happily and began to climb the tree. He threw Shifu’s scolding far away and played enjoyably

It’s getting darker and darker.

“Po! Po! Where are you?” A worried voice came to Po’s ear, it’s Tai lung, Po’s brother, Shifu’s oldest student of seven.

“Brother! I’m on the top of the fern tree! Come to play with me!”

“Po! When can you grow up? Come down now!” Tai lung was powerless when facing his beloved little brother.

“O K ！I’m coming!”

“Tai lung, what do you bring for me?” Po knew that his brother must bring some food for him just like every time he was punished by Shifu.

“Ah, noodles and bun! Oh, my favorite! I love you brother!” Po swallowed his slaver.

“Po, eat slowly! Don’t hurt yourself!” Tai lung said gently. He loved this brother so much; they’ve been living together since they were adapted by Shifu.

Tai Lung was the oldest also the best students of Shifu, so he was pointed as dragon warrior by tortoise Master Oogway. He was abandoned when he was a cub, Shifu raised him up and taught him KungFu. Tai Lung was grateful to Shifu and Master Oogway, he respected them and treated them as his parents. As for his five little brothers and sisters, Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, and Crane, he always took care of them, especially the naughtiest one Po. As the dragon warrior, Tai Lung also was responsible for protecting the whole village safe.






It was a sunny day, in the morning it just as usual as any sunny day, birds were singing on the trees, villagers were working hard in the field, children were playing happily.

Same as every day’s routine, Tai Lung and other six were patrolling around the village carefully. He felt there was something unusual. He lied down and tried to listen to the sound from the ground. He heard a huge hurricane-liked sound was approaching.

He suddenly realized that the biggest danger is coming. Master Oogway and Shifu told him there was a Black dragon lived in the West Haven who attacked the village many years ago and was defeated by Master Oogway and Shifu. Since then, he practice martial arts crazily and try to revenge one day.

Tai Lung immediately called others by a whistle and told them the severe situation. He allotted Tigress to report to the Master Oogway and Shifu, sent Viper and Monkey to tell the villagers to hide in the forest, the rest, Mantis, Crane, Po and himself secured the only way of access the village.

After a while, the huge hurricane-liked sound became more and more clear. A split second, the evil Black dragon appeared the other side of the access accompanied with a thunder-liked roar and thick mass of dark cloud.

“Ha Ha Ha…..Who are you? Get away! Tell that old tortoise, go away form the palace right now! You stupid fool! I’m the master indeed! That should be my palace! I’ll flatten the whole village，Ha Ha Ha Ha……”





“You are such a ruffian! You are dreaming!” TaiLung denounced angrily.

“Ha Ha Ha……”

The Black dragon’s tail swept to TaiLung and Po with a very strong wind.
TaiLung and Po toppled over onto the ground.

“Ha Ha Ha Ha… you are not my opponents, go away!” Black dragon shouted and laughed scornfully.

“Circle!” TaiLung cried and stood up, with Po, Mantis and Crane, four of them at once made a circle rounded the Black dragon. They used strategic movement to resist Black dragon’s attack.

The Black dragon was too strong to defeat, he picked Crane first, tossed him out of the circle and punched Mantis hardly, and blood flowed freely down Mantis’s cheeks.

“Crane!... Mantis!” Po screamed sadly.

“Po! Back to back!” TaiLung cried.

Po immediately stood back to back with TaiLung and prepared for Black dragon’s next attack.

“I told you go away, ha ha ha….. You stupid guys!”

“Po, be careful!

“I know, brother!”

Pa pa pa… Fists like heavy rain fall down to Po, Po fought back, used his left leg swept to Black dragon; TaiLung jumped up and kicked Black dragon’s head. Black dragon was really angry; he picked Po up by the collar and threw him to the down hill. “Po!” TaiLung cried and used his whole strength punched Black dragon, Black dragon slapped and punched back, TaiLung was hurt severely. He lied down and became unconscious.

Black dragon rushed towards to the main palace where Master Oogway and Shifu lived.

“Ha ha ha ha, you two old fellows, long time no see. Today I’ll send you to the hell!” Black dragon’s voice was full of hatred.

Master Oogway and Shifu sat calmly.

“Black dragon, you didn’t change at all! Just come, we are waiting!” Master Oogway responded grimly.

Ya-Yi… Black dragon dashed to Master Oogway and Shifu. Master Oogway fought back used his stick, and Shifu used his magic tail as a weapon.

Black dragon has progressed a lot and Master Oogway and Shifu were old, gradually they went exhausted and were wounded.

In the most dangerous moment, TaiLung led Po and others came in.

“Master! Shifu!” They cried out anxiously when they saw Master Oogway and Shifu lied down on the ground painfully.

“We are fine. Defeat him together, protect the palace and villagers!” Master Oogway said weakly.

Seven students of Shifu stood in a circle that round Black dragon in the centre. Though Black dragon was very fierce and hard to defeat, nobody was frightened. TaiLung and Po attacked Black dragon’s head and upper part of body, Tigress, Monkey and Mantis hit his tail; and Viper, Crane supported others.

It was the hardest fight the seven ever met. They fought to Black dragon from the palace to the field, from the field to the cliff. All of them were wounded severely, but Black dragon was getting stronger.

TaiLung was really worried about their situation, he had an idea soon. He gave Po a glance, and he knew Po understood what he meant. Yes, Po understood. They grew up together; they knew each other’s thought very well. Po realized this time TaiLung would sacrifice his life to defeat Black dragon.




No! Po thought and decided to do what TaiLung wanted to do. He induced Black dragon near to the cliff and punched him, Black dragon picked Po up and tossed him towards to a huge rock. At the last second, TaiLung used all his energies held Po and two of them were falling down. Black dragon kicked them and carried a big stone wanted to smash them. At this crucial moment, TaiLung jumped, dashed to Black dragon and threw him to the cliff.

“Ah……” Black dragon screamed and soon disappeared into the deep valley.

“TaiLung brother, TaiLung brother!” Po cried sadly. TaiLung was mortally wounded and fell into unconscious.

After a while, TaiLung opened his eyes hardly.

“Don’t cry, Po, you have to be strong…. Protect others…. They need you…. Promise me, don’t fall miserable….. to become a dragon warrior, protect all…..” TaiLung used his last strength and died.

“TaiLung!--”

Po cried out, there was nothing could release his sorrow.

Since then, Po grew up at once. He became crazily studious, practiced martial arts every day from morning to mid-night, helped the Master Oogway and Shifu protecting the whole village, and looked after younger sisters and brothers.

Soon after, Po was pointed by Master Oogway and Shifu as the new dragon warrior and responsible for the safety of all.

Week 6-7

the beginning part of my fan fiction (draft)

Hi, all
This is only the beginning part of my fanfiction, which is about KungFu Panda. As I'm not sure what is going on next , it hasn't got a title. Please, please give me some suggestions so that I can make it more interesting.

“Po! Can you concentrate a little while?!” Shifu shouted.
“You need to think what I’ve taught you before practice! No dinner today! Go to the cliff till I allow you come down!” Shifu said angrily and walked away.
“Oh, poor me!” Po mumbled and climbed up to the cliff. It was dark and cold, Po felt hungry, and he began to looking for some wield fruits to feed him.
“Nothing fun here! Aha, berries! En, yummy! Let me find some funny things! Maybe… maybe I can climb that tree!” Po talked to himself happily and began to climb the tree. He threw Shifu’s scolding far away and played enjoyably.
It’s getting darker.
“Po! Po! Where are you?” A worried voice came to Po’s ear, it’s Tai lung, Po’s brother, Shifu’s oldest student of seven.
“Brother! I’m on the top of the fern tree! Come to play with me!”
“Po! When can you grow up? Come down now!” Tai lung was powerless when facing his beloved little brother.
“O K ！I’m coming!”
“Tai lung, what do you bring for me?” Po knew that his brother must bring some food for him just like every time he was punished by Shifu.
“Ah, noodles and bun! Oh, my favorite! I love you brother!” Po swallowed his slaver.
“Po, eat slowly! Don’t hurt yourself!” Tai lung said gently. He loved this brother so much; they’ve been living together since they were adapted by Shifu.

Tai Lung was the oldest also the best students of Shifu, so he was pointed as dragon warrior by tortoise Master Oogway. He was abandoned when he was a cub, Shifu raised him up and taught him KungFu. Tai Lung was grateful to Shifu and Master Oogway, he respected them and treated them as his parents. As for his five little brothers and sisters, Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, and Crane, he always took care of them, especially the naughtiest one Po. As the dragon warrior, Tai Lung also was responsible for protecting the whole village safe.

It was a sunny day, in the morning it just as usual as any sunny day, birds were singing on the trees, villagers were working…

As every day’s work, Tai Lung and other six were patrolling around the village carefully. He felt there was something unusual. He lied down and tried to listen to the sound from the ground. He heard a huge hurricane-liked sound was approaching.
He suddenly realized that the biggest danger is coming. Master Oogway and Shifu told him there was a black dragon lived in the West Haven who attacked the village many years ago and was defeated by Master Oogway and Shifu. Since then, he practice martial arts crazily and try to revenge one day.

Tai Lung immediately called others by a whistle and told them the severe situation. He allotted Tigress to report to the Master Oogway and Shifu, Viper and Monkey to tell the villagers to hide in the forest, the rest which are Mantis, Crane, Po and himself secured the only way of access the village.

……….

the proposal of my fanfiction

Hi, Kirsty and Hanna

You posted your fan fiction already, you’ve got a step further than me, envy you guys!
I’ll read it later.

I only got my proposal of my fan fiction till now. I’d like to create a story about Kung Fu Panda use narrative. I may change the plot of the film, as well as some characters. I’m thinking about that, and I’ll write the story directly while thinking, and post it asap.

Wouldn’t be too long… I hope so!

The New Begining for Belle and Vincent(formative)

Hi everyone, This is my proposal.I have started a bit on my fan fic.just need more ideas but this is just first part.I hope its ok.Im interested in fairy tales so i thought i would touch on Beauty and the Beast.This was one of my old time fav when i was young.So im kinda inspired in recreating this story.So pls feel free to comment.I may make some changes if i come up with a better idea.Im open to your ideas as well.thanks gals=)enjoy reading


We all know what had happened in the movie "Beauty and the Beast" and of course like every fairy tale it was a happy ending. The Beast had a turned in to a handsome prince since the curse had been broken because of the love he had for his lover Belle(beauty).We also remembered that evil man called Gaston who was totally in love with belle and he also tried to kill the beast but somehow he failed and he died after falling off from the top of the castle.But how do we know whether he is actually dead??That will remain a mystery.As for now well its been already 2 years and Belle and Prince Vincent(the beast real name) has already married and they just gave birth to a son name Eric.Its a new chapter in their lives but will there be any complications in this lovely family?Will that curse from the beast effect their son?What would happend?Only time will tell....

Chapter 1

Once a upon a time, It was beautiful day that morning, the birds were chirping and the air was so clear and crisp. Belle was walking in the garden with her little son Eric. She wrapped the little boy in her arms while looking at him in the eyes. Deep down inside she was wondering what would her son turned out to be in the next 10 to 20 years..He just looked exactly like his father. Big blue eyes that looked like the ocean , and golden hair that was just like the sun. She knew that her son would turn out to be a handsome prince one day. But then one thought came in to her mind..the curse!..what if?…soon after that the thought disappeared as she heard Vincent’s voice and she turned around. He looked incredibly handsome that day with his white shirt tucked in with a black leather coat that fitted on his body well and his hair neatly tied in to a ponytail.
‘Belle… Good morning!,’ He said. He came to Belle closely and gave her quick hug and immediately look at his child and gave him a kiss on his forehead.
The baby smiled and Belle responded, ‘Well, Eric is certainly happy to see you,’ she smiled at him.
‘Oh well, he does look happy today and the sun is shinning so brightly this morning.what a beautiful day,”. He smiled to himself.
Then belle asked him whether he wanted to take a walk with her and he was more than happy to join her. As they walked, Belle still seemed a bit trouble, but she had no idea of what was troubling her. She was hoping that nothing bad would happen especially to her family..

Formative Fanfic( The spiriting away of Sen and Chigiro)

I chose anime ‘The spiriting away of Sen and Chihiro’ by Miyaaki H.
IBut I am not sure about the title. I will keep thinking for the title. The main story will be focus on after Sen’s family go to picnic. I haven’t finished yet it is just for formative.

Sen is a naughty girl who almost never obeys her parents.

“Sen!! Could you turn down the TV volume? I am on the phone now and it’s a really important call” Dad persuaded Sen
“No way dad ~~~ it’s more important to me than your call” Sen is screaming in her room and keep watching the TV.
“Sen!!! How can you say that to your dad ??!! Mum said with angry face.
“You and dad are always busy! You guys only care about work!
You and dad DO NOT care about me! I think I am not member of this family and I don’t understand why you gave me a birth! You shouldn’t have done that if you don’t want to have a child. I really really really hate you two!!!! Sen is crying loudly.
“You are not a baby anymore. I am tired of hearing what you’ve just said. I and dad are really tired. It was busy day today. Just go and study and clean your room.

It is a normal situation in Sen’s family. She is too young to understand her parents why they work so hard. Both her mum and dad grew in poor family. That’s why they wanted to earn a lot of money and they don’t want their child to have the same experience as them. Now, they are rich enough to enjoy life but they are not satisfied with what they’ve got.

-Sen’s room-
“I hate them! I am not their daughter! I will never do what they told me to do. Never !!”
She is seeing her face from the mirror and thinking if there’s anything that looks similar with her dad or mum. “Ah…. I don’t want to talk to them. I wish they were just animal that can’t speak”. Sen spoke to herself and smiled while she was imagining her mum and dad are animal.

“Sen ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ can you come to help me? Mum screamed.
“No I am busy”
“Sen, can you go to supermarket and get a bottle of juice ?
“No I am busy”
“Sen, can you pass that salt?
“No I am busy”
Whenever mum and dad ask to do something her answer is always “No, I am busy”


-Sunday morning-
“Honey I think we should do something with Sen. She is really angry this time. She is so different from last time. Mum told dad with worried voice.
“Ok! Let’s go to picnic.”
They decided to go to the sea and have dinner at the Masato that is expensive Japanese restaurant.
“Sen! Do you wanna go to the sea? Dad will buy you really delicious food for dinner.
“No I am busy”
“Can you be a good girl at least today? Please? It’s good chance to gather family together. Dad is persuading Sen to go together.
“Ok but only today that I follow you. Don’t think I forgive you I still hate you.”
“Oh ok thank you anyway”

-2hours after driving-
“Dad!! How long do I more have to just sit in the car?
“Wait! I will find shortcut!!”
“Honey! Just go the way that we went last time. Whenever you tried to find shortcut we always lost the way”.
“Don’t worries just watch how I find the way.”

“Oh my god !!!” Dad screamed.
“What’s wrong?????” Both Sen and mum screamed as well.
“I don’t know where to go. I’ve never seen that long tunnel before.