Dragon warrior
Hi, Paul
Film Kungfu Panda tells the story of believe. Po is a panda who worked in the family noodle restaurant; although he was over weight and clumsiness he had a dream that was to become a great master in the discipline. In order to defeat the previous student evil snow leopard warrior Tailung, and to protect the valley, tortoise Master Oogway held a ceremony to choose a dragon warrior who should be a supreme master of kung fu that could defeat Tai Lung. Unexpectedly, not the favorite five students of Shifu( Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, Crane), Master Oogway insisted to point Po as the dragon warrior ignoring Shifu’s against. Before past away, Master Oogway persuaded Shifu to believe that Po was the best choice for dragon warrior. Meanwhile, Po began to accept arduous training and finally became a dragon warrior defeated Tailung. In my fan fiction about Kungfu Panda, Tailung is the kindest brother of Po, the best students of Master Oogway and Shifu and the dragon warrior, who always looks after others and dies in a fight with the evil Black dragon. Po is the naughtiest student and always lazy on practicing. Tailung’s death makes him become studious and responsible and at last he becomes a new dragon warrior.
Hi, all
This is the whole story of my fan fiction Dragon warrior, hope you can enjoy it! ^-^
Waiting for your conments--
“You need to think what I’ve taught you before practice! No dinner today! Go to the cliff till I allow you come down!” Shifu said angrily and walked away.
“Oh, poor me!” Po mumbled and climbed up to the cliff reluctantly. It was dark and cold, Po felt hungry, and he began to looking for some wield fruits to feed him.
“Nothing fun here! Aha, berries! En, yummy! Let me find some funny things! Maybe… maybe I can climb that tree!” Po talked to himself happily and began to climb the tree. He threw Shifu’s scolding far away and played enjoyably
It’s getting darker and darker.
“Po! Po! Where are you?” A worried voice came to Po’s ear, it’s Tai lung, Po’s brother, Shifu’s oldest student of seven.
“Brother! I’m on the top of the fern tree! Come to play with me!”
“Po! When can you grow up? Come down now!” Tai lung was powerless when facing his beloved little brother.
“O K ！I’m coming!”
“Tai lung, what do you bring for me?” Po knew that his brother must bring some food for him just like every time he was punished by Shifu.
“Ah, noodles and bun! Oh, my favorite! I love you brother!” Po swallowed his slaver.
“Po, eat slowly! Don’t hurt yourself!” Tai lung said gently. He loved this brother so much; they’ve been living together since they were adapted by Shifu.
Tai Lung was the oldest also the best students of Shifu, so he was pointed as dragon warrior by tortoise Master Oogway. He was abandoned when he was a cub, Shifu raised him up and taught him KungFu. Tai Lung was grateful to Shifu and Master Oogway, he respected them and treated them as his parents. As for his five little brothers and sisters, Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, and Crane, he always took care of them, especially the naughtiest one Po. As the dragon warrior, Tai Lung also was responsible for protecting the whole village safe.
It was a sunny day, in the morning it just as usual as any sunny day, birds were singing on the trees, villagers were working hard in the field, children were playing happily.
Same as every day’s routine, Tai Lung and other six were patrolling around the village carefully. He felt there was something unusual. He lied down and tried to listen to the sound from the ground. He heard a huge hurricane-liked sound was approaching.
He suddenly realized that the biggest danger is coming. Master Oogway and Shifu told him there was a Black dragon lived in the West Haven who attacked the village many years ago and was defeated by Master Oogway and Shifu. Since then, he practice martial arts crazily and try to revenge one day.
Tai Lung immediately called others by a whistle and told them the severe situation. He allotted Tigress to report to the Master Oogway and Shifu, sent Viper and Monkey to tell the villagers to hide in the forest, the rest, Mantis, Crane, Po and himself secured the only way of access the village.
After a while, the huge hurricane-liked sound became more and more clear. A split second, the evil Black dragon appeared the other side of the access accompanied with a thunder-liked roar and thick mass of dark cloud.
“Ha Ha Ha…..Who are you? Get away! Tell that old tortoise, go away form the palace right now! You stupid fool! I’m the master indeed! That should be my palace! I’ll flatten the whole village，Ha Ha Ha Ha……”
“You are such a ruffian! You are dreaming!” TaiLung denounced angrily.
“Ha Ha Ha……”
The Black dragon’s tail swept to TaiLung and Po with a very strong wind.
TaiLung and Po toppled over onto the ground.
“Ha Ha Ha Ha… you are not my opponents, go away!” Black dragon shouted and laughed scornfully.
“Circle!” TaiLung cried and stood up, with Po, Mantis and Crane, four of them at once made a circle rounded the Black dragon. They used strategic movement to resist Black dragon’s attack.
The Black dragon was too strong to defeat, he picked Crane first, tossed him out of the circle and punched Mantis hardly, and blood flowed freely down Mantis’s cheeks.
“Crane!... Mantis!” Po screamed sadly.
“Po! Back to back!” TaiLung cried.
Po immediately stood back to back with TaiLung and prepared for Black dragon’s next attack.
“I told you go away, ha ha ha….. You stupid guys!”
“Po, be careful!
“I know, brother!”
Pa pa pa… Fists like heavy rain fall down to Po, Po fought back, used his left leg swept to Black dragon; TaiLung jumped up and kicked Black dragon’s head. Black dragon was really angry; he picked Po up by the collar and threw him to the down hill. “Po!” TaiLung cried and used his whole strength punched Black dragon, Black dragon slapped and punched back, TaiLung was hurt severely. He lied down and became unconscious.
Black dragon rushed towards to the main palace where Master Oogway and Shifu lived.
“Ha ha ha ha, you two old fellows, long time no see. Today I’ll send you to the hell!” Black dragon’s voice was full of hatred.
Master Oogway and Shifu sat calmly.
“Black dragon, you didn’t change at all! Just come, we are waiting!” Master Oogway responded grimly.
Ya-Yi… Black dragon dashed to Master Oogway and Shifu. Master Oogway fought back used his stick, and Shifu used his magic tail as a weapon.
Black dragon has progressed a lot and Master Oogway and Shifu were old, gradually they went exhausted and were wounded.
In the most dangerous moment, TaiLung led Po and others came in.
“Master! Shifu!” They cried out anxiously when they saw Master Oogway and Shifu lied down on the ground painfully.
“We are fine. Defeat him together, protect the palace and villagers!” Master Oogway said weakly.
Seven students of Shifu stood in a circle that round Black dragon in the centre. Though Black dragon was very fierce and hard to defeat, nobody was frightened. TaiLung and Po attacked Black dragon’s head and upper part of body, Tigress, Monkey and Mantis hit his tail; and Viper, Crane supported others.
It was the hardest fight the seven ever met. They fought to Black dragon from the palace to the field, from the field to the cliff. All of them were wounded severely, but Black dragon was getting stronger.
TaiLung was really worried about their situation, he had an idea soon. He gave Po a glance, and he knew Po understood what he meant. Yes, Po understood. They grew up together; they knew each other’s thought very well. Po realized this time TaiLung would sacrifice his life to defeat Black dragon.
No! Po thought and decided to do what TaiLung wanted to do. He induced Black dragon near to the cliff and punched him, Black dragon picked Po up and tossed him towards to a huge rock. At the last second, TaiLung used all his energies held Po and two of them were falling down. Black dragon kicked them and carried a big stone wanted to smash them. At this crucial moment, TaiLung jumped, dashed to Black dragon and threw him to the cliff.
“Ah……” Black dragon screamed and soon disappeared into the deep valley.
“TaiLung brother, TaiLung brother!” Po cried sadly. TaiLung was mortally wounded and fell into unconscious.
After a while, TaiLung opened his eyes hardly.
“Don’t cry, Po, you have to be strong…. Protect others…. They need you…. Promise me, don’t fall miserable….. to become a dragon warrior, protect all…..” TaiLung used his last strength and died.
“TaiLung!--”
Po cried out, there was nothing could release his sorrow.
Since then, Po grew up at once. He became crazily studious, practiced martial arts every day from morning to mid-night, helped the Master Oogway and Shifu protecting the whole village, and looked after younger sisters and brothers.
Soon after, Po was pointed by Master Oogway and Shifu as the new dragon warrior and responsible for the safety of all.
4 comments:
Wow~ what a great story Grace!
I really enjoyed reading it ^^*
I think you well-described the scenes- it was really easy to follow the story as drawing the pictures in my mind~ felt like watching a film~
Especailly for the scenes that Black dragon appeared with the roar of thunder and dark cloud & the last fighting scene by Tailung and Po against Black dragon-
And the ending was bit different than what i expected...i thought both Po and Tailung would defeat the Black dragon but....no....Tailung died... T.T
I think it could be a kind of reversed situation for readers and it's a good choice~
Hi, Hanna
Thanks for your comment.
When I wrote the story, I tried my best to describe the scene of fighting among Black dragon and Tailung, Po and others, but I could fell how pale my description was. I couldn't do better because my limited language, I felt powerless to present a more attractive story.
But I also felt quite exciting when I created the story, it's really enjoyable, wasn't it?
Eventhough I don't satisfied with my writing, still I am quite proud of myself as I created my own story! Also from the process of writing, I leant that I need read regularly to improve my ability of writing.
hey grace, i like your fanfiction...its so cute..ahaha...i think its because of PO...I think the ending part is sad and also happy. Sad because of Tailing;s death and the good thing is that Po manage to defeat the black dragon.I think the other good part is that Po is now the new dragon warrior.I believee this is something remarkable as Po worked hard at first in learning kung fu and i think he truly deserve a reward at the end of the day.Its good that your fanfic has many different situations for eg. there is abit of humor,sadness,happiness etc.This is a good way to make your fanfic interesting and readers will also find it enjoyable. DO u intend to add more or is that the end of your story??i Think u have done good job so far..keep it up...=)
Hi grace !
It's really good story. You've done great work.
I really enjoyed reading your fanfic. You described the scenes really well, especially the fighting scene and normal day (sunny, bird singing,and so on )
I like the story that Tailung and po are silbings in your story whereas in original story, at the first time the other students don't accept po as a dragon worrior. But as others said it was sad that Tailung died at the end.
There are sad and happy ending together in your fanfics, which is good , because the readers can feel two emotions after reaing it.
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