Sunday, August 31, 2008

the beginning part of my fan fiction (draft)

Hi, all
This is only the beginning part of my fanfiction, which is about KungFu Panda. As I'm not sure what is going on next , it hasn't got a title. Please, please give me some suggestions so that I can make it more interesting.

“Po! Can you concentrate a little while?!” Shifu shouted.
“You need to think what I’ve taught you before practice! No dinner today! Go to the cliff till I allow you come down!” Shifu said angrily and walked away.
“Oh, poor me!” Po mumbled and climbed up to the cliff. It was dark and cold, Po felt hungry, and he began to looking for some wield fruits to feed him.
“Nothing fun here! Aha, berries! En, yummy! Let me find some funny things! Maybe… maybe I can climb that tree!” Po talked to himself happily and began to climb the tree. He threw Shifu’s scolding far away and played enjoyably.
It’s getting darker.
“Po! Po! Where are you?” A worried voice came to Po’s ear, it’s Tai lung, Po’s brother, Shifu’s oldest student of seven.
“Brother! I’m on the top of the fern tree! Come to play with me!”
“Po! When can you grow up? Come down now!” Tai lung was powerless when facing his beloved little brother.
“O K !I’m coming!”
“Tai lung, what do you bring for me?” Po knew that his brother must bring some food for him just like every time he was punished by Shifu.
“Ah, noodles and bun! Oh, my favorite! I love you brother!” Po swallowed his slaver.
“Po, eat slowly! Don’t hurt yourself!” Tai lung said gently. He loved this brother so much; they’ve been living together since they were adapted by Shifu.

Tai Lung was the oldest also the best students of Shifu, so he was pointed as dragon warrior by tortoise Master Oogway. He was abandoned when he was a cub, Shifu raised him up and taught him KungFu. Tai Lung was grateful to Shifu and Master Oogway, he respected them and treated them as his parents. As for his five little brothers and sisters, Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, and Crane, he always took care of them, especially the naughtiest one Po. As the dragon warrior, Tai Lung also was responsible for protecting the whole village safe.

It was a sunny day, in the morning it just as usual as any sunny day, birds were singing on the trees, villagers were working…

As every day’s work, Tai Lung and other six were patrolling around the village carefully. He felt there was something unusual. He lied down and tried to listen to the sound from the ground. He heard a huge hurricane-liked sound was approaching.
He suddenly realized that the biggest danger is coming. Master Oogway and Shifu told him there was a black dragon lived in the West Haven who attacked the village many years ago and was defeated by Master Oogway and Shifu. Since then, he practice martial arts crazily and try to revenge one day.

Tai Lung immediately called others by a whistle and told them the severe situation. He allotted Tigress to report to the Master Oogway and Shifu, Viper and Monkey to tell the villagers to hide in the forest, the rest which are Mantis, Crane, Po and himself secured the only way of access the village.

……….

Friday, August 29, 2008

the proposal of my fanfiction

Hi, Kirsty and Hanna

You posted your fan fiction already, you’ve got a step further than me, envy you guys!
I’ll read it later.

I only got my proposal of my fan fiction till now. I’d like to create a story about Kung Fu Panda use narrative. I may change the plot of the film, as well as some characters. I’m thinking about that, and I’ll write the story directly while thinking, and post it asap.

Wouldn’t be too long… I hope so!

The New Begining for Belle and Vincent(formative)

Hi everyone, This is my proposal.I have started a bit on my fan fic.just need more ideas but this is just first part.I hope its ok.Im interested in fairy tales so i thought i would touch on Beauty and the Beast.This was one of my old time fav when i was young.So im kinda inspired in recreating this story.So pls feel free to comment.I may make some changes if i come up with a better idea.Im open to your ideas as well.thanks gals=)enjoy reading


We all know what had happened in the movie "Beauty and the Beast" and of course like every fairy tale it was a happy ending. The Beast had a turned in to a handsome prince since the curse had been broken because of the love he had for his lover Belle(beauty).We also remembered that evil man called Gaston who was totally in love with belle and he also tried to kill the beast but somehow he failed and he died after falling off from the top of the castle.But how do we know whether he is actually dead??That will remain a mystery.As for now well its been already 2 years and Belle and Prince Vincent(the beast real name) has already married and they just gave birth to a son name Eric.Its a new chapter in their lives but will there be any complications in this lovely family?Will that curse from the beast effect their son?What would happend?Only time will tell....

Chapter 1

Once a upon a time, It was beautiful day that morning, the birds were chirping and the air was so clear and crisp. Belle was walking in the garden with her little son Eric. She wrapped the little boy in her arms while looking at him in the eyes. Deep down inside she was wondering what would her son turned out to be in the next 10 to 20 years..He just looked exactly like his father. Big blue eyes that looked like the ocean , and golden hair that was just like the sun. She knew that her son would turn out to be a handsome prince one day. But then one thought came in to her mind..the curse!..what if?…soon after that the thought disappeared as she heard Vincent’s voice and she turned around. He looked incredibly handsome that day with his white shirt tucked in with a black leather coat that fitted on his body well and his hair neatly tied in to a ponytail.
‘Belle… Good morning!,’ He said. He came to Belle closely and gave her quick hug and immediately look at his child and gave him a kiss on his forehead.
The baby smiled and Belle responded, ‘Well, Eric is certainly happy to see you,’ she smiled at him.
‘Oh well, he does look happy today and the sun is shinning so brightly this morning.what a beautiful day,”. He smiled to himself.
Then belle asked him whether he wanted to take a walk with her and he was more than happy to join her. As they walked, Belle still seemed a bit trouble, but she had no idea of what was troubling her. She was hoping that nothing bad would happen especially to her family..

Formative Fanfic( The spiriting away of Sen and Chigiro)

I chose anime ‘The spiriting away of Sen and Chihiro’ by Miyaaki H.
IBut I am not sure about the title. I will keep thinking for the title. The main story will be focus on after Sen’s family go to picnic. I haven’t finished yet it is just for formative.

Sen is a naughty girl who almost never obeys her parents.

“Sen!! Could you turn down the TV volume? I am on the phone now and it’s a really important call” Dad persuaded Sen
“No way dad ~~~ it’s more important to me than your call” Sen is screaming in her room and keep watching the TV.
“Sen!!! How can you say that to your dad ??!! Mum said with angry face.
“You and dad are always busy! You guys only care about work!
You and dad DO NOT care about me! I think I am not member of this family and I don’t understand why you gave me a birth! You shouldn’t have done that if you don’t want to have a child. I really really really hate you two!!!! Sen is crying loudly.
“You are not a baby anymore. I am tired of hearing what you’ve just said. I and dad are really tired. It was busy day today. Just go and study and clean your room.

It is a normal situation in Sen’s family. She is too young to understand her parents why they work so hard. Both her mum and dad grew in poor family. That’s why they wanted to earn a lot of money and they don’t want their child to have the same experience as them. Now, they are rich enough to enjoy life but they are not satisfied with what they’ve got.

-Sen’s room-
“I hate them! I am not their daughter! I will never do what they told me to do. Never !!”
She is seeing her face from the mirror and thinking if there’s anything that looks similar with her dad or mum. “Ah…. I don’t want to talk to them. I wish they were just animal that can’t speak”. Sen spoke to herself and smiled while she was imagining her mum and dad are animal.

“Sen ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ can you come to help me? Mum screamed.
“No I am busy”
“Sen, can you go to supermarket and get a bottle of juice ?
“No I am busy”
“Sen, can you pass that salt?
“No I am busy”
Whenever mum and dad ask to do something her answer is always “No, I am busy”


-Sunday morning-
“Honey I think we should do something with Sen. She is really angry this time. She is so different from last time. Mum told dad with worried voice.
“Ok! Let’s go to picnic.”
They decided to go to the sea and have dinner at the Masato that is expensive Japanese restaurant.
“Sen! Do you wanna go to the sea? Dad will buy you really delicious food for dinner.
“No I am busy”
“Can you be a good girl at least today? Please? It’s good chance to gather family together. Dad is persuading Sen to go together.
“Ok but only today that I follow you. Don’t think I forgive you I still hate you.”
“Oh ok thank you anyway”

-2hours after driving-
“Dad!! How long do I more have to just sit in the car?
“Wait! I will find shortcut!!”
“Honey! Just go the way that we went last time. Whenever you tried to find shortcut we always lost the way”.
“Don’t worries just watch how I find the way.”

“Oh my god !!!” Dad screamed.
“What’s wrong?????” Both Sen and mum screamed as well.
“I don’t know where to go. I’ve never seen that long tunnel before.

My Fanfic - Formative

Hi,girls~^^ This is my formative fanfic- Actually i started writing when paul said about the proposal....so i've decided to just post my draft- Plz have a look and feel free to comment any ideas about it- ^^; I wil be really appreciated it~ ^^*


< IRON-MAN: The New Beginning >


‘TONY STARK OR IRON-MAN’
‘WHO IS HE - THE TONY STRAK’
‘IS HE A REAL SUPERHERO’
‘WHAT IS THE TRUTH’
‘WHO IS THE IRON-MAN’


“Hey..Tony…are you ok?”
“Yeah- I’m better than ever!...What’s up?”
“Better than ever?!?......If you say so – but you know, you’ve been down here for three days… without sleeping. …you think that’s normal? Huh?”
“Three days? Really? I thought it’s… still Tuesday.”
“Nop, it’s Friday.”
“Friday….! Oh, good…- you want some shots?”
“……….all right”

Tony and Pepper have been drinking about half an hour in his living room without saying anything each other, but only looking and smiling at each other.

“Tony, are you….are you all right? I mean…..I’m pretty serious here-”
“Yeah, I’m fine- Why not? ”
“How… how could you be so comfortable like that? I really don’t understand. You really make me confuse.”
“Think simply Miss Potts- I did nothing wrong, I think I’ve just done what I have to do – my father said never lie to anybody. I just said the truth- which… maybe people really wanna know.”
“Maybe….you know, every media has been talking about you for 24 hours! All the time- All over the world! Some of them think you got crazy because you said the TRUTH- ‘I’m Iron-man’- Have you ever thought about what could happen because of your saying?....I’m… I’m really lost-”
“Pepper, don’t worry- and please just be happy- everything will be fine tomorrow- everything will go back where they were.”
“Yeah…it’s easy for you to say so…”

It’s been three horrible days after Tony announced that he is ‘Iron-man’. Some people said he’s got crazy because of the thing, which they don’t know, happened to him in Afghanistan and some people….kind of believed him….because he is Tony Stark- As Pepper is his only assistant she had to get rid of her phone right after the nightmare and had to stay in Tony’s house.

“Hey, Pepper- I’m thinking to go on holiday for few weeks. Where shell we go?”
“Holiday? With me? Hmm…..it sounds nice sir, but I doubt that you’ve got the things to sort it out first?!”
“Yeah, I know of course- I’m the man of Stark Industries. Bring the things that I have to sign in.”
“………..it’ not just…”
“Pepper, hurry up- I’m, no- we’re leaving in half an hour- “
“Tony-…..wait a second………Ok, I think it will be very nice for you to have some holiday. I think you definitely have to have, but not me- I’d love to go…but next time…oh… really hate to say this…but, I’m sorry.”
“I thought so….this time I’ll go by myself, but you promise me to go together next time. I’ll take you wherever you want!”
“Appreciate, Tony.”

After this simple and pointless conversation he really left. He said he will be somewhere in Europe. Pepper has started thinking about what she has to do from now on sitting alone in Tony’s marvelous private lab.
Few hours later, she got a bit strange e-mail from the person called Charles Stane. It’s for Tony but anyway he wasn’t there so Pepper opened it.
“I KNOW WHAT YOU DID.
CONTACT ME ASAP.
OR YOU DIE.”
Suddenly, Pepper felt really nervous and alarmed instantly and somehow sensed that it’s not just blackmail because it’s from ‘Charles Stane’ – the only son of Obadiah Stane. She remembered when she met Charles Stane last year. He is the most powerful weapon entrepreneurs in Asia who influenced a lot by his furious father. He’s been in Japan more than 10 years because of his business. But why did he send this kind of email to Tony? Does he know what really happened to his father? Then what? What is he thinking about? Revenge….or something else? She wasn’t sure what she has to do so she called to Agent Colson who only can trust.
“Hello, Agent Colson”
“Hello, Miss. Potts. You are calling because of the mail. Right?”
“How did you know?”
“We, S.H.I.E.L.D, also got one as well.”
“Oh my god, what is he really thinking? what do we have to do? “
“Has Tony seen this mail?”
“Not yet. He’s away. I can send him this but…I don’t want to. He doesn’t say anything but he’s got blanked out his mind nowadays. And also I’m sure he will meet Charles if he sees this….but I don’t want him to meet Charles. He’s exactly same as his father, Obadiah. He could be planning something bad. ”
“I understand your feeling Miss. Potts. We also think this is not that simple. We think it is a formal threat to ‘Iron-man’. Not Tony. We’ve investigated after we got this email and we found that he knows the truth about his father’s death.”
“I thought so....”
“Please give us little bit of time. I will contact you soon.”
“Ok….please.”

Tony has arrived one of the small town in Italy. It was so quiet and beautiful. This is the kind of place where he could clear up his mind. He was quite exhausted, not because of jet lag but because of the public and irritating media-plays. He was expecting some sorts of plays but actually it was much worse than he thought but he thinks it is ok- it could be just a beginning of new life for ‘Iron-man’. There is no regret at all for new life but only feels sad about can’t be a Mr. Big for Pepper. After he came back to his villa and he turned on the TV. “What the hell is going on?” He was in shock. It was one of his main factories of Stark Industries and it got attacked by a monstrous machine – it looked like a robot. “Robot?!? Where is it come from? What is it doing over there??! Ok-ok-- nobody or even no-robot wants me to have some rest-.” He called to Jarvis straight away and asked for figuring out what that robot is and be ready for changing to his power-suit as soon as he gets back home. In his private plane, he called to Pepper.
“Hey, are you ok?”
“Oh, Tony. How are you?”
“How am I? I’ve seen the news already. What’s going on in there?”
“……….It’s Charles Stane. The son of Obadiah. He sent an email to you 2days ago and I replied without asking. I’m sorry.”
“What did you say to him?”
“He said he gonna revenge for his father, so I said…...it was Obadiah’s fault and I think he got mad. He said he gonna come to kill you, Iron-man. And there he is….I’m so sorry. It’s my fault.”
“Pepper, listen to me- It’s nobody’s fault. I’m on my way back home. Where are you?”
“I’m at your……….”
“Hello?? Hello?? Pepper??!”
The phone was cut off. He called her again but she didn’t answer the phone. 10 minutes later he got a call – It was Pepper.
“Hello, Tony- no, no, I should call you Iron-man. I’ve just come to see you but you are not here- so I’ve just played with some other things. Wow, it’s quite fun-That’s why my father really liked to be Sector 16. But you killed my father and there is no such a Sector 16 - but here I am now. Finally the time has come-”
“Who are you? Where’s Pepper?”
“Oh, she’s with me, she’s fine- She’s pretty attractive. Very sexy---Ah, one thing- I’m sorry to say this but she’s got something with her. Something looks like a bomb is hanging in front of her. I don’t know what it is. Please come and join with us. Are you ready? Time is clicking~~”
The man hung up. Tony was sure that it was Charles- and everything was destroyed by him. He knew what he has to do but there weren’t enough time.
Finally he got to his lab and wore his suit – ‘Here’s Iron-man -“Ready Jarvis?” “Whenever you want!” “Ok, let’s go to see Pepper. I miss her so much-.”

Iron-man went to his office where he thought Pepper might be and there she was. – With Jericho missile tied her up in the corner. ‘How could it be….’ he thought. He felt very sorry and miserable. “Pepper, sorry for being late and… I’m sorry.” “No, I’m fine…- you know, the time…9 minutes left.” “Don’t worry, let me handle this.”
“Hey, Here you are! - Before you handle with Pepper, please handle with me first~~~”
There was Charles. He was a robot. It looked quite similar with Sector 16. It fired some kind of gas which make Iron-man can’t see properly. Iron-man had lost his balance for few seconds but he got back quite shortly. Suddenly bombs exploded everywhere. Iron-man blocked all of them. It was a piece of cake for him. “You! You think you can keep this one as well?!” The cluster bombs with electric power transmission attacked one of Iron-man’s legs and it almost went through his leg. Charles came up to Iron-man and stepped on his arc reactor. “Ah…..” “You did kill my innocent father. Now, I’m killing you very slowly- You must learn the pain of the death. Here’s the electric beam that can kill you little by little” Iron-man couldn’t move and getting hard to breathe.

“Tony! Tony!” Pepper was yelling at him. “Pepper…..I can’t…” He was trying to push up Charles. It was tough for Iron-man because of the beam. He felt like his limbs are getting paralyzed. “Tony- Tony- Please, don’t…” Suddenly Iron-man was making a huge growling sound and he gave off Charles. Iron-man holds up Charles as twisting his body and he got dumped out of the building as breaking the entire window around Tony’s office. Charles’ flying buttons, which were at his both side, got broken when Iron-man twisted his suit so he directly drove into the ground. It was the end of Charles’s Sector 16. Both Obadiah’s and Charles’ couldn’t defeat Iron-man. Iron-man ran straight to Pepper and destroyed the Jericho missile a second before it blows up. Pepper got really scared and she was trembling with fear. Iron-man took off his mask. “Are you ok, Pepper?” There was Tony, not Iron-man. Pepper was really glad to see him again. “Tony….” She was crying like a baby. “It’s ok now. It’s all right.” Tony hugged Pepper very tightly. “Pepper, don’t worry- and please just be happy- everything will be fine tomorrow-

Sunday, August 24, 2008

Week 5

Sunday, August 10, 2008

Week 4

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