Friday, August 29, 2008

The New Begining for Belle and Vincent(formative)

Hi everyone, This is my proposal.I have started a bit on my fan fic.just need more ideas but this is just first part.I hope its ok.Im interested in fairy tales so i thought i would touch on Beauty and the Beast.This was one of my old time fav when i was young.So im kinda inspired in recreating this story.So pls feel free to comment.I may make some changes if i come up with a better idea.Im open to your ideas as well.thanks gals=)enjoy reading


We all know what had happened in the movie "Beauty and the Beast" and of course like every fairy tale it was a happy ending. The Beast had a turned in to a handsome prince since the curse had been broken because of the love he had for his lover Belle(beauty).We also remembered that evil man called Gaston who was totally in love with belle and he also tried to kill the beast but somehow he failed and he died after falling off from the top of the castle.But how do we know whether he is actually dead??That will remain a mystery.As for now well its been already 2 years and Belle and Prince Vincent(the beast real name) has already married and they just gave birth to a son name Eric.Its a new chapter in their lives but will there be any complications in this lovely family?Will that curse from the beast effect their son?What would happend?Only time will tell....

Chapter 1

Once a upon a time, It was beautiful day that morning, the birds were chirping and the air was so clear and crisp. Belle was walking in the garden with her little son Eric. She wrapped the little boy in her arms while looking at him in the eyes. Deep down inside she was wondering what would her son turned out to be in the next 10 to 20 years..He just looked exactly like his father. Big blue eyes that looked like the ocean , and golden hair that was just like the sun. She knew that her son would turn out to be a handsome prince one day. But then one thought came in to her mind..the curse!..what if?…soon after that the thought disappeared as she heard Vincent’s voice and she turned around. He looked incredibly handsome that day with his white shirt tucked in with a black leather coat that fitted on his body well and his hair neatly tied in to a ponytail.
‘Belle… Good morning!,’ He said. He came to Belle closely and gave her quick hug and immediately look at his child and gave him a kiss on his forehead.
The baby smiled and Belle responded, ‘Well, Eric is certainly happy to see you,’ she smiled at him.
‘Oh well, he does look happy today and the sun is shinning so brightly this morning.what a beautiful day,”. He smiled to himself.
Then belle asked him whether he wanted to take a walk with her and he was more than happy to join her. As they walked, Belle still seemed a bit trouble, but she had no idea of what was troubling her. She was hoping that nothing bad would happen especially to her family..

4 comments:

hanna August 30, 2008 at 5:15 PM  

Hi, Deli~ I think it's a really good start and you seem like u got some talents for writing a fanfic- kk
As i read, i could draw the pictures in my mind like reading a beautiful fairy tale~
I really wonder what will gonna happen next...i could guess a little bit but...not sure until u finish! kk
Let's see my idea was right or not! kk
good luck~ *^^*

Grace Pu August 31, 2008 at 4:03 PM  

Hi,Deli
Wow, you created such a wonderful start, beautiful wife, handsom husband and lovely son,it's the ideal family, isn't it?

I can't wait for the next...
Hope you don't let this family suffer too much..

finger cross, haha

Deli August 31, 2008 at 6:41 PM  

hahaha,thanks gals...im glad im in the right direction...i shall keep u all guessing.hehehe...i will try 2 make it as interesting as possible...=)

Dr Paul Mountfort September 10, 2008 at 7:03 PM  

B&thB is a classic fairly-tale with deep roots across cultures and of course the classic cartoon Disney treatment...

I like the idea of Belle's concern her offspring - little baby boy - might be a beast himself one day (incidentally Jungians claim the beast-motif relates to the difficult-to-love, shadow-side we all possess and how the lover must overcome this to truly accept the beloved. Go figure).

I guess the formulaic language production - 'the birds were chirping and the air was so clear and crisp' - is appropriate to the Disney style - sure you don't want to give it more of an edge, though, or will that come? Be grat to show you guys Jean Cocteau's B&thB - art house treatment of the theme, but hardly a popular genre I guess!

Look forward to seeing more.

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